All Comments on 'Pristine Love in the Woods'

I read your three stories and this the one I like most. It's a truly captivating story with only one defect: the ethnological digressions, though interesting, are a bit too long for an erotic story. A part from that, I like everything else: the academic environment, the breast worship, the main character portrayed as a lesbian goddess, the feminist implications, the lyrical language of your descriptions and so on. I love the scene when the younger woman overhears the phone call of her older partner. I hope you can write more on this same topic. Maybe you could write a sequel in which the younger woman can join her lesbian goddess and her circle of friends in Delhi.

Thank you so much for the kind words. When I have time to spare, I certainly will try to concoct a story in that direction.

This is a very good story, whose rating would have been much higher had it been vetted by a professional editor, some of the anthropological/historical parts abridged while retaining their gist, and a few inconsistencies pointed out and corrected.

Absolutely, I stumbled upon some typos upon re-reading the story. Yes, the ethnological part has shifted the center of gravity of the story. Thank you so much.