All Comments on 'Private Lessons Ch. 04'

Genuinely amazing writing, very impressive

Keep it up!

May i make a request? Id really like to see Lacey start to overcome Amirah. And eventually fucking the headmistress. Personally im very much into soft nonconsent - relectance/ coercion.

And i like to see those in authority abuse their position, and also get abused get taken down a peg

Some of the best writing I see on these boards, which sometimes struggle with basic grammar.

Things that I appreciate:

The characters have some depth to them, and change over time.

Pacing is good. The sexy stuff is set-up, instead of just diving right in.

There's an element on conflict, which drives the plot forward.

I can't come up with any criticisms. Keep up the good work.

Wow this sucks.. first she made her her cumslut and now she’ll dunp her for a new character, shani? Who is more physically fit? How would Lacy feel..