All Comments on 'Privates Practice'

Jesus christ. 3 pages. I had to start writing this comment early because I knew I might forget something. (3 pages is a good length though, dw.)

1) I dunno if it's personal preference for you to spell it "come" rather than "cum" but I've gotten so used to reading "cum" that it's a bit distracting to see it spelled "come". If you'd be willing to make the switch, I don't think anyone would complain.

2) It's funny to me that the doctor WASN'T wearing gloves from the beginning. "Oh yeah I'm fine with patients cumming all over me, but I gotta draw the line somewhere!" Not a very sanitary clinic huh? (That said, I'm just poking fun. The story could never work if it adhered to real medical practices. Though it would be hot if the doctor had them on from the beginning and took them off at some point to indicate things getting unprofessionally sexual.)

3) I feel like the problem the patient is having should've been a little more clearly outlined. At first, the reader believes "oh she can't ejaculate", which is quickly disproven, probably for comedic purposes, but at that point it becomes pretty unclear exactly what the real problem is. It's confusing to see the doctor continuing her efforts when the reader doesn't understand what her goal is.

4) The confrontation between the doctor and the nurse seems really out of the blue. There's gotta be a better way to introduce the fact that they're both futas. I'm just not sure I buy the logic of it. The doctor's reluctant to show her patient that she's a futa. The nurse is okay with the patient knowing she's a futa, but doesn't want the doctor to find out.

5) Fuck me it was all a ruse. I fucking knew something was wrong. I just got to the break between the first patient and the second. Everything I mentioned so far (aside from point 1) is explained by it all being an act.

6) Jesus how gullible are all of these "clinic" patients?? "I'm going to try something my grandmother taught me." "I'm cured!"

7) "Why is everyone pretending here? [...] Is the dating scene really THAT bad right now?" "It's that bad." Jesus christ I can't believe you keep fooling me.

Okay I reached the end. I love a happy ending! I'm not sure how I feel about the story appearing to have so many flaws at the beginning only for them all to be resolved by patience. The only real point I had left by the end was "cum" vs "come". Also, don't forget to post this on futanari palace. We can have a full conversation about it there.

I have some strange hangups on spelling. I really cannot stand calling it 'cum' spelled that way, with the exception of 'precum,' but I honestly avoid that word for the same reason.

As it is, I'm absolutely thrilled that I bamboozled you so thoroughly. This was a very silly idea and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

You have a way of writing that makes me want more of these characters and scenarios. The fake doctors office, the role play, it’s all so sexy. Thank you.

Any take that combines futa and use of the word 'ziggarut' is a winner in my book!

Hilarious and hot, great combo!