by Chiapet97
Great start,hope you add more to it!
Waiting for part 2
Well, not bad aside for the blatant grammatical errors. I always have to look over the paper/piece at least three times before submitting something.
Can't wait to hear about what happened at the apartment
Nice start; looking forward to more.
Woah good story! Waiting for a second part ^^
incomplete
Good start, now bring the 2nd part asap