All Comments on 'Prized Inheritance Ch. 04'

The connections within the body are 'muscles' not the shellfish 'mussels'

various other spelling errors detracted from the flow of the story.

Otherwise a good story with a fun storyline.

yeah, there are a lot of spelling and grammatical issues, but it's sensitively written and focuses on story.

there are some authors on here with perfect spelling, but who use a thousand flowery words to describe absolutely nothing and become tedious to read as a result. this author is not suffering from that and anyhow, i'm intelligent enough to understand what is meant so i really don't mind. this is a really nice story that just gets better and better.

It is impossible to get involved with the characters when there are so many grammar and spelling errors. Their there, ran run, dinning room table, Pursue peruse, and so many more. Spell check can't find homonyms or correct grammar. You need a proofreader.