All Comments on 'Pro Bono'

loved it and look forward to more of you stoies.

As a first ever story it wasnt a bad effort. As being fairly dominant though myself as well submission is usually based on trust so feel there was a slight let down in that area also with her form of career the recording it bit id have expected nore reluctance on

I think the story was very good for a first effort, especially as you were writing about your own personal desires. Perhaps with more experience (both writing and submissive situations in real life) you will blossom as an author and a sub.