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GhostPlasmaGhostPlasma8 months ago

This has got to be one of the most original premises that 8ve read in a long time. Fantastic job with the story and also with the quality of writing.

Im amazed that Marta's own growth wasn't triggered by her interacting with Nick directly. Would have been a nice cap to it.

Might be interesting g to read more. But the storyline is nice and complete as is.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It was going great and suddenly it took a turn for the megalomaniacal, what the fuck. Seriously disappointing.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

feels like the story just kinda ended, with nick suddenly loosing all control. Great read and premise, but kinda disappointing ending.

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