All Comments on 'Proclivities - Pt. 02: What Now?'

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yowseryowserabout 2 years ago

Sweet story

Engaging, authentic naughty indulgences.

WhanmoreWhanmoreabout 2 years ago

This story escalated quickly

Priscilla_JunePriscilla_Juneabout 2 years ago

Im taking a lot of mental notes about how to create such engaging characters. Great story :3

njguy1002njguy10029 months ago

Very good development of the characters

Djmac1031Djmac10318 months ago

As a writer of exhibitionist / voyeur stories myself, this hits all the right notes. Good slowness burn approach to her exhibitionist tendencies that I am sure will expand as the series continues.

Nice work.

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Returning to Lit after a long hiatus. Previously published under lil_elvis_lover, I've improved, aging like fine wine