All Comments on 'Proclivities XIV: The Party'

This whole series is amazing... I wait for the next chapter!!

Whoever anonymous is, thank you!

Fabulous! I just finished XIV, having binged the entire series. I was so titillated by Linda’s journey, there was no time to stop and write comments. My humblest apologies and promise on my next read-through, to comment after every chapter, honest!

The interplay between the lovebirds is adorable. It’s great that they can fall into the role play so easily without getting all weird about it. My only suggestion is, it may be time for some complications or stressors in the relationship. When matters get tough, that’s when people show you who they really are inside. Adversity builds character as long as there is integrity at the core.

Thank you for sharing your creative talents with us.

Thanks nthusiastic. Part XV was submitted today.