by ppprincess25
Like how you’ve taken a not uncommon scenario (whether in reality or in someone’s erotic daydreams) and developed very interesting characters. He is a near perfect caricature and I mean that as a compliment to your writing; trying so hard to wrap his head around what is happening to him — and the frenetic, self-absorbed sex captures him so well. The student is the intriguing character in this storyline; and the way you depicted the sex highlights the intrigue. Love the anonymity — adds a great deal to your piece. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟