by humminbean
I wish I could have met the wonderful lady.
I hope she is an inspiration to other readers.
Anybody who has read my stuff would know why I really like the use of humor and language in this story. Really, really well-written and fun to read. Often I skip a lot of the narrative just to get to the "nasty bits," but not here. Read, and enjoyed, every word.
Argh, it's over?? :) Wonderful story. Great tension and build-up. Enjoyed how it came in courses. Thanks for sharing!
What a beautiful story! Lovely to feel, hear and taste. The food, the drink were a perfect touch. But deep down, what made the story perfect were the not perfect people in deep love and lust with each other. A sexy 'real' woman enjoying herself, being naughty and not quite sure what will happen next. A confident man still amazed at discovering a woman he thought he knew only to learn more.
Man, if she is real, don't lose her. If she is an image, a thought, a combination of experiences, you are to be encourage to keep your brain in gear.
One more thing. Beautiful imagery like this cannot be rated high enough. GREAT WORK.