All Comments on 'Promise Not to Tell'

Short and sweet.

More please, he gotta cum in her pussy.

Expand this but don't get it wrong with lots of pathetic characters.

Nicely done. Short and to the point. Part 2?

more please

Not a lot of character development but that could be a positive if this is the beginning of a series involving this sibling pair. Lots of room for growth, both in the characters and the back story.

Nice first effort.

There wasn't much here, and what was here was like the dried-up exoskeleton of a spider that died in the fall and isn't swept up until spring - dry and lifeless.

Very hot!

A nice interlude in an otherwise boring afternoon. It seemed like it was probably a regular occurrence.

That's a solid story for a first submission. Keep it up.

Very nicely done.

Short and sweet, nothing wrong with that.

Feel free to ignore me and my one "Complaint" (Which really didn't diminish from the story.) but it was a little bit *Porny* that the sister went from kinda dainty and inexperienced seeming, to full on deepthroat. Maybe that'll be explained, more likely it doesn't need to be.

Short, sweet and sexy. Well written without a lot of the usual superfluous nonsense. Great first effort.

Very good

5 Stars. Nice, short and sweet, I hope there will be a chapter 2, they've got a lot of exploring left to do.

Terrific story, really hot! You write really well. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Very very good. Your writing is excellent. Unless I missed it the story never actually calls them blood siblings, so lots of options for further chapters. Well done.

Enjoyed this - 5* for a great first story.

Maybe a nice dusting of sexy hair for Mike's hard muscular chest? Up the ante here!