All Comments on 'Proof of His Love'

ohhh sweetie....that was soo lovely....please....write more...

wench

juice it up baby...good work! i knew you could do it. please...keep writing..

love you girlie.

velly

Big ole hugs

Very well done kitten, keep writting, this is great, sarcy

Hey Kitten! This was fun! Pacy, sexy, sassy. I'm not a great one for this formalised D/s writing normally, but at least yours had some charm and humour, and just enough to bring the characters beyond the mundane. Good one!