All Comments on 'Proof of Love is a Powerful Thing'

great first chapter hope the second comes soon

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get somebody to proof read this. the concept seems nice but I couldn't get past the first page at all. Your grammar is lacking far too much. It seems like a nice story, but fix the punctuation and spelling mistakes before you release the second chapter.

I like this one much more then your other story and I'm looking forward to see part 2.

cant wait

Dude. I have read all of both of your stories, and let me just say that this one is much more compelling than the other. You have GOT to keep writing this, its SO good!

I sure hope Kay's Penis grows beyond any normal human sizes.

Great story cant wait for more

would like to read more of this story. please keep going