All Comments on 'Protect Me: Prison Love Story Ch. 04'

by Freckleman64

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BlowPopJBlowPopJover 3 years ago
Lovely

So beautiful

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I loved this story. I’d like to know what happens next in their lives together. Excellent writing. You did an amazing job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

Great sex, great love, and they so belong together! Derek started out as distant, uninterested, but he warms up to Joe, and Joe responds. Love Derek's sexy hairy chest. Keep writing about their life on the outside!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

I am hoping you write more stories like this, and like others I'm sure, a follow-up story about Derek and Joey would be great.

Definitely recommending this story.

i7ev7i7ev7over 3 years ago

I had to comment... this isn't what I usually like to read here. I am not so into romance, but this was beautiful and very hot. I was rooting for Joe and Derrick the whole time. While a bit fantastical, fantasy is what I come here for and this series is amongst my favorites.

Congratulations on your first series. It was excellent!

I'd like to request a sequel with Tony. I know he did terrible things, but he's so complex and I would enjoy reading more about his journey.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wait 😔

He never got to duck Derek :/

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Can we at least have a special episode where Joe fucked Derek? 😂

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This story was really good. I'm not much into just plain fucking without any plot whatsoever.

So this was a welcome surprise, finding stories with good plot can be hard on here.

I enjoyed every minute of reading this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
As God intended...

"All of those memories built in Derek as he continued to fuck his boy, his hips slamming against Joe's ass as their bodies joined the way God intended."

This phrase captures the essence, the beauty of this touching story.

"As God intended" reveals a simple truth that has always existed, yet needs to be affirmed and proclaimed all over the Earth. WITH JOY!

We're talking here essentially about LOVE! without dismissing the physical interaction. 😊

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Thank you for such a beautiful story. Love does prevail, and happiness can be had.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I want more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story. I loved the surprising twists and turns and kept hoping that they would end up together. It had good character development. I’m a sucker for romance. Kudos!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it! Would love it see more of them!

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Writer. I love all kinds of erotic fiction, but I tend to like to write stories with lots of melodrama, romance, and of course, gay sex.