All Comments on 'Prototype Ch. 07'

Awesome!!!

I need another fix right now.

Please don't make me wait too much!

Story is really coming together. Can't wait for the next installment!

Doing a great job.

If you broaden the harem, keep in mind to have the characters speak and think differently (common failing in multi person/first person).

I'm also a little concerned that your story is broadening out. It might be hard to eventually wrap up.

That you don't write faster. This story is becoming more and more fantastic and the wait between chapter is frustrating.

Keep up the good work.

Can't wait what is in store for Maggie.

Beware, when a story expand and create a harem it has a tendency to just keep adding girls and lose focus. With such a large cast of girls the author spend less time fleshing out the characters(motive and psychology) and the story become blog down.

So far your writing has been great, thank you for the effort and diligence.

I am only warning u, because I see many others stories on Lit erotica make the same mistake.

As mentioned in another comment I'm worried if the granular character development that it's so phenomenal in this series can be pulled off with a broadening cast but I trust you'll do a great job