All Comments on 'Pruriential Paladin Ch. 01'

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Ilfen1Ilfen1over 1 year ago

This was very visceral and enjoyable, though I'm not so sure about hobgoblins as mates. What kind of image did you have of them before and after the transformation? Can you provide an online reference?

LeilliannaLeilliannaover 1 year agoAuthor

At this point I was still very much in flux with where I intended to go. They will be included through more and I'll see what I can do about describing looks more. End result, anything from a feminine Goliath to Demona as a pornstar.

The next chapter focuses on them as well and one later will close their story better I hope.

Thanks for commenting.

Sl33pingforestSl33pingforestover 1 year ago

That was interesting looking forward to more.

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