All Comments on 'PTO sub Cummittee'

Nice. At times uneven. But please. A sequel.

Badly needs it.

What type of editing do you think?

What do you mean by unevenness?

--TheCowboy

Thank you for an enjoyable read. Hopefully this becomes a larger series.

So I loved the story. It's going in a great direction but you seriously need an editor. Hope to see more soon!

A sequel would be great

I liked the story overall. But there was some inconsistency. After dinner, suddenly Kendall has a butt plug, but its insertion was not mentioned prior to its appearance. You are a decent writer. Personally I like they way you use the He and i, and how your Dom refer to her parts as his. It's not her cunt, it's his cunt, not her ass, his ass. If you could make those types of assertions more consistent as well, your story will have better flow. Good luck :)