All Comments on 'Pulp Fiction Day after Halloween'

I want to start with the statement that I always appreciate anyone brave enough to write here.

Constructively I would recommend improving the grammar. Either that or this is a translation and it isn’t working (sorry). Anyway, the concept was good but the stilted writing stopped me reading after a page.

Good luck on your future stories

Hey, thank you so much for the feedback! It really helps a lot! I have worked on my grammar, and continue to work at it, since English is not my native language. Just want to mention this was for the halloween contest and didn't have that much time to check the grammar, so it's gonna have a ragged feeling; maybe I'll go through it again sometime in the future and deliver a better version.

But if just a few words have stopped you from reading tho the concept was good, it doesn't make sense to me, tomato potato. I wonder if you'll find a better concept than what I have displayed in here, and with a good grammar, or a more 'natural' feeling; I guess you'll never know since you won't finish it :)

good luck hunting!