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All Comments on 'Pumpkin's Surprise'

by Pumpkin4343

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Well written and interesting P.O.V

This is a well written and interesting story. It seemed a bit short, I would have enjoyed a little more time to get to know the characters better (next chapter?). You are an excellent story teller.

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