by SonForBBW
Well, you have to have more chapters on poor Heather. The options/adventures that she is going to have to endure are endless. Be as creative as you have been on writing what happens to Heather. I can think of a lot of things that could happen. So far, so good.
A little tame. I bet your first draft was better. Where is the ass spanking with belts and hands, until her ass is red. BIG TITS and no titty torture, big tits beg to be slapped, pinched, bit, and bring nipple clips. Use a belt as a leash, and lead her around on her hands and knees, sucking cock, and licking both women's cunts. Ass eating to make the guys hard again to fuck her. Bring her int0 the toilet and piss on her and make her swallow.