All Comments on 'Punishment'

I enjoyed the story but the spelling mistakes spoiled it a little for me x sissy Lucy

ZZZzzzzzzzzzz...wake me up when there's some sex.

I enjoyed it and look forward to the next part. The criticism is only criticism please just learn from it and continue writing. As they same practice makes perfect - it took me a lot of practice!

@buckteasdale: erotica does not have to be sex.

@this anonymous: not every writer here has English as first language. Besides, I have seen a lot of stories here with more and bigger (spelling) mistakes...

Enjoyed the story and the resolution. Keep up the good work. If you right a second part it might be fun to have either his mother or Chris take him bra shopping.

This was one of my favorite stories I've read on here. And, I've been coming to this site for several years. Great start/first story. I hope another chapter is dropping soon. FWIW, I'd enjoy having Chrissy tease him a little and take on a bit of a dom role in the relationship. After all, she is super attractive and a year older than Frank. (and Frank has got to get a feminine name. Gotta!) Thanks again.

Liked the story. What was mothers punishment.?