All Comments on 'Punishment Day Festival Pt. 04'

Your storytelling is excellent. Please do continue!

There is more in the pipeline, if anyone would like focus on other characters or something, let me know.

Ah, that continues to be delightful. A pity that she didn't cage him. This apothecary sounds as if she could be the protagonist of her own spinoff series, dishing out humiliating concoctions. Also I would love seeing the other three machines in action.

Hah! The punishment engines will come back. So will the Mocking Birds :) Thank you for the feedback, Anonymous!

Love these stories. Very imaginative and a superb evocation of a strange yet familiar world. I read the first 4 parts in 4 days. On to part 5!

So much brilliance and creativity in your stories, you really must learn to add your character’s names to your local dictionary in your editor! Cias, Cais, Yais, Yanis… when reading intently — and I will always read your amazing stories intently — the shift can be a bit jarring.

But really, that’s so pathetically minor, I’d rather just gush effusively over your eroticism and world building. It’s so delicious.

Must read some more now… thank you for sharing your delightful fantasies!