All Comments on 'Puppy's First Submission'

by puppygirl65

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deepemeralddeepemeraldalmost 16 years ago
Great start, but...

It started off great and hot, but hardly had time to get going before it was over. Keep on writing, you've got the right ingredients!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
hehe

I loved the way you wrote it. That was great, congrats<3

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