All Comments on 'Pure Heart Pt. 04'

Loved it...one on the best series on here. I wish you would kept with the teasing a little longer. Please don't bring tanya into a threesome or something like that. I can't wait for pt5

Just first rate. Well written. Good pace and timing. Exciting and erotic. I look forward to part 5.

Your stories are the best. :D

It was very beautiful story. Very nicely written. Really don't understand whom alex really loves. I think sara loves him. Hope part 5 will be coming soon.

i think u shud have tanya walk in on the two of them be disgusted and run off so that alex and sara can be together forever. u are a brilliant writer and i cant wait for the next segment

I have been waiting for chapter 4 for a really long time now but it was worth the wait, I find your stories amazing and very erotic and I also love the way you tease and build it up. Thanks alot and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

yes he finally screwed his sister but what will tanya think what will the parents think will she get pregnant sounds like tanya or sara will be in for alot of heart acheyou sure can ruin a story

You fucked nothing up. All the stories before were leading to this moment. I can't wait to see what you do next. Excellent work!

Who cares what people think, I don't think Alex and Sara would care too much. Giving youself fully like that is a big deal but it must be harder for them to move onto different people especially after having sex. I read this one after the Our Shared Bathroom story and that one seems to be more life like, more detail and better written. Don't get me wrong I did like this one but I seemed to get more involved wth the other one. Keep up the great writing though

The pacing, the love, everything about this saga is excellent, and I can't think of a story on all Literotica I prefer. Bravo.

Brilliantly written, more please.

This story was wonderfully evolved and superbly written! It really is a work of true art!

just finished the entire series to date. found the characters and storyline, while fictional, to be entirely within the realm of possibility. readability and grammer made the story even more enjoyable. really looking forward to pt 05. hope it will be published soon. thank you.

that is completely hot. i read all 4 parts, and can't wait for #5. i wish i had a sister like that!!

Although we knew this was where their playing around would end up, it's illogical to pull out and then stick it back in all sticky with fertile little swimmers... And taking her virginity (if the mention of a hymen meant she was) is brushed off as an unimportant detail in your stories. It's a HUGE issue, especially if her brother is her first.

Both cuming together and their first time - very well written and the series has shown their emotions evolve!

Thank you.

Mmmm? So maybe a cell has entered another? lol

You are saying its a Pure Heart.

Just tell me if it is then how come the character fooling around his sister and girlfriend at the same time.

Try to draw real emotions between sibling characters. It will help.

Better Next Time >>>

you write well, fantastic story, hope you continue this one mate!

They finally consummated their relationship with each other!

They finally consummated their relationship and he did not ejaculate immediately. Still a beautiful story.

Well led to this conclusion. Beautiful and full of love.

story going perfect so far. do i see pregnancy in next chapter?

There is nothing like siblings taking each other's virginity.

Really,really good chapter! Totally out of character for clueless wuss-boy, but still excellent. Funny how he can magically last more than five seconds now, lol.

"" I felt my body begin to pulse...felt my penis start to swell...felt my balls retracting and I had to pull myself up and away, barely sliding myself out before unleashing myself, ejaculating all over her pulsing and quivering lips. Even now her legs pressed against me to pull me back inside and I knew I shouldn't have but once the last burst of semen had pushed out onto her I let Sara draw me back into herself - feeling my body glide into her with no effort. ""

@@ might as well have just gone ahead and cum in her since your just shoving it back in after you came, rofl. ...not exactly like you asked for permission or got it before you shoved your dick through her hymen anyway, lol, might as well knock sis up too! Hehe ;). (Gotta love sarcasm!;). @@

Story seems to be improving and getting interesting though!

Dude stop playing and finish this.

How do you give a story more than a 5. Like 5+

At last. Good story

Well worth 5/5