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All Comments on 'Pushing Boundaries'

by Archidictus

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BigTXTeddyBearBigTXTeddyBearalmost 13 years ago
Great job

Very good description and I definitely enjoyed the tease portion. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
painful

Overbaked...had to stop reading after the first paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Pompous drivel

"Summer's crucible made gravity of the falling day ... " and things go downhill from there. What garbage!

2ndPerson2ndPersonabout 12 years ago

I enjoyed it very much, though the preamble could have become a separate story entirely.

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