All Comments on 'Pussy in the Graveyard--and More'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A word about grammar...

WAY too many exclamation points. When in doubt, read it out loud (very quietly) . If there is still doubt about punctuation, use a period. It would improve this story so much. Imagine if you were reading a story and there were lots of unnecessary question marks. It would be distracting. The same goes for exclamation points. Otherwise, write on, my friend!

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