All Comments on 'Putting on a Show: Her First Time'

Wow! That was one HOT little story. I thoroughly enjoyed that...5 Stars from me!

Looking forward to finding out what Anna does next! Very hot, had me hard the whole way through.

The hotness of your writing is exquisite.

What there was of it is pretty hot, but it's barely a beginning.

Not enough about what he was thinking about her body parts that he was watching. Not enough about what he'd like to see her do to/with them. Not enough about what he'd like to do to her: Kiss her? Touch her breasts? Squeeze them? Think about what they'd feel like? Touch her ass? Touch her pussy? Wonder how wet she was? Wonder how she smelled? Wonder what she tasted like? Wonder about what it would take to bring her to orgasm with his tongue? Her ass? Wonder about how her lips and tongue would feel while she sucked on his cock.

Etc.

Not enough story to give it it five stars. Gave it four.

Absolutely fabulous writing.

The interplay between her own thoughts and the memories of Babushka's oppressive comments is delightful.

A truly intoxicating and totally erotic story.

Absolutely loved it !

A well written, sexy story. i hope to read more of your stories x