All Comments on 'Putting the Sub back in Suburb'

that it's so short. What potential this has. She could become the Pet of all the women there or she could become a Domme and teach all the women there what it's all about. Or..........

There is something missing, here. Lesbian sex! Maybe, in part 2?

only two stars mainly because there was no story here. I started reading and it was over. had potential. Pappasleaze!

a good start but you need part two...somany things and falls are possible and you write nicely the start..keep alive write more

thanks

a Deidre story. And that's high praise. More please.

Agree with the others it was too short. It was just getting hot when you crammed the best part into a paragraph and ended it. Broke my heart

Does no one here understand foreplay or titillation? Looking forward, of course, to Pt.Two. Good start!

A great line to end a chapter: "While she holds my leash, I fear nothing." Such a simple, yet powerful, statement of the D/s dynamic. Brava!

What a great opening chapter! Just lures you in with the characters and the situation. Very hot.