All Comments on 'QOS Creator 04 - First Taste'

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corruptedcuckcorruptedcuckalmost 2 years ago

I don't remember any mention of her bust or arse size before so this made their enlargement difficult to visualise. I hope you will continue to have more piercings done. Although I think it important that you mention the husband that bit does feel quite 2 dimensional at present. Difficult to envisage where the story will go on that front.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I like the very slow "conditioning" and modificatios made to become a total sex toy for BBC and craving it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not to my liking, only gave it a 2, sorry. I know it's fantasy but that tale's beyond, and not into this Big Black genre.

Littleone2713Littleone2713almost 2 years ago

Great story. Can't wait for next chanpters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I loved the build up to this moment. You have such attention to detail, and provide a lot of descriptions that make this such a pleasure to read. Look forward to the next part, hopefully sooner rather than later!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The story is great and the build up is so good but i hope if you can more details about mental transformation and i wish if you can add more chapters quickly

Thanks for sharing this with us

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

CN’T Qit for next chapter

AmbulAmbul7 months ago

I love all the body modifications, especially the huge new tits. Are the modifications to her mind also working as expected. Certainly Pam now is consumed by cock and being fucked.

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Story continues! Thanks for the positive feedback! The QOS Island series will be 11 parts. I've got plenty of other stories outlined, just need to flesh them out. How do you think about continuing the QOS series (making it a trilogy)? What other stories would you like to see?...

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