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Click here"I don't know how to respond to that."
"I don't either, but I think it's a good thing. The fact is, we are sharing you - your bed, your life, our lives - and we have to get along for all our sakes. I don't regret it at all, its just a little weird when you realize it's happening."
Dave looked at her silently.
"Just hold me David. Hold me all night."
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- COMMENTS
Anonymous9 days agoThere are a couple typos here and there, but easy for most of us to ignore. This is a GREAT story so far. Well done and thank you!
alsith6 months agoTypo or missing word: "your concern for the,". I suspect the -> them. However it's possible you meant to have another word after "the".
alsith6 months ago"not procrastinating, just doing side quests".
I have that shirt. It's a good shirt. :)
alsith6 months ago"degreed" is this a typo, or are you riffing on being given a degree as having been "degreed"?
RonanJWilkerson9 months agoAuthor@Nurses
The similarity comes down to my interest in examining how moral men handle bad situations. And it's harem lit.
RonanJWilkerson9 months agoAuthorRegarding Esme: It is established in the QT verse by the original author that children below the "kill zone" are acquiring immunity, so there is no looming dread for her. I'll see about slipping a mention in the next chapter along those lines. And Absolutely no intent to have an underage girl in a sexual situation! Lit's rules aside, that's a hard no from me.
Regarding keeping characters straight: I might put together a character list after there's a few more involved. At the moment, there's the MC (David Belsus), his three partners (Jan, Lupe, and Becca) and Lupe's daughter Esme. (Now,on my Patreon page, I have a visual guide listing all characters, some of their motivations & interests, and pictures I'm using as a touchstone for the physical descriptions.)
I'll mention the fan base name suggestions in the Discord chat for Corrupting Power, the originating author.
Thank you all for reading, rating, and commenting. It is gratifying to see people enjoying my creative work.
rwrasotpwdg29 months agoI agree with Slofred. While it is nice to see some "reality" in these stories, the spectre of the kid in the house is somewhat problematic. I'm not sure it is a super dire thing, but it definitely needs to be addressed delicately.
One other small thing, that I'm sure others are having issues with. I'm searching on Lit for new Quaranteam chapters almost daily now. But it is very challenging for me to keep them all straight in my head. Is it possible to have some sort of brief paragraph either on your profile or in each chapter with a brief synopsis? Even if it's just: This is the QT series where the dude is in Texas, he realized he loves his neighbor who will be joining his team any day now and also his neighbor's live in babysitter had the hots for him and she's joining in too. Otherwise I find it takes me half the chapter to remember all that!
Otherwise, thank you for your continued work in the QT universe, love what you're doing!
Nurses9 months agoSlofred is obviously not familiar with the story line. It's teenagers who all die. For the little girl it's no worse than the flu. She will be fine.
Nurses9 months agoA nice long chapter. 5 of 5 of course. I would describe myself as a Quaranteam addict. Your Bunker series is close enough I consider it to be the same story type. I really enjoy this story line. Feel close to the characters. I know the feeling about the dog. I live in a very sparsely populated area. We don't have animal control. You have to do it yourself. The largest city here is 3,000. But I have a view out the back- down the hill, that is beautiful.
