by NoahJon
I like it, but the chapters are too short, have you considered making them a bit longer?
If you can't come up with a full scene, that's cool, but leave it to people that can. You're like the dumb high school bitch that starts a hand job and doesn't finish- not worth the fucking time it took to get there.
I like them. Make the chapters longer and ignore the haters who have nothing constructive to offer.
Keep it coming man, this story is fuking hot but we need to know what happens next.
i like the story and the pacing even, just wish you would write more of the story before posting.
please continue this, it's fucking hot. Also, please continue your other story too.
This story captures such a specific kind of hotness that’s hard to find and I already love it! The way you handle the dumb horny jocks trope in this already gets me going lol. Couldn’t disagree more with those comments talking about the length of the chapters or not enough happening - the slow, inevitable build up is the hottest part as these two straight lads slowly begin to realise they’re probably not 👀 I hope you didn’t take those comments to heart. As long as this story is continually updated, it’s a slam dunk for me.
Keep it up bro x
this setup is really nice! I'm very interested in how that bigger cock and bigger ass will get acquainted in the future
This is hot tbh, I hope you can write more, ignore those comments, express yourself the way you want to.❤