All Comments on 'Quarantine Ch. 01'

So is the son joining these two Milfs??

Great story can't wait for more. Hopefully more in the series

Great reminisciences for sisters that shared so much.

As your text gets hotter and hotter your writing begins to falter. Proof positive that you are getting right into your work.

Sargedog1 has comments worth reading. Perhaps you could get your sister to Proof Read for you.

New buisness venature successful, or is it sucksexfull, from night one. Imagine the potential as word gets around the internet.

I will echo some of the comments below. Great story that needs an editor to make it a better read and flow better. I am looking forward to the continuation of the story and maybe you can get some to proofread it before you publish. Great start.

i get it it's fiction but this is so unrealistic, what a turn off 1/5