All Comments on 'Quarantine: Day 1'

You have great talent as a story teller. I am sure you will get even better with time. One area where you can quickly improve your skills would be with grammar. Subject verb tense agreement is very important to your reader. Either study up or get an editor. Keep writing!

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I like the fact the your story is well written, with a good pace and style. Looking forward to the next installment

I could be quarantined if I had a lover or bf with me. It wouldn't be so bad but to be alone.. OMG

Great beginning. You’ve got me hooked.

The fact that this was written around this time is in very bad timing and poor taste

There are plenty of words that could have been more concise, but the story is hot. I want to read what happens next!

I love the COVID-19 hook, it adds a lot of realism to your story. It was short and sweet and definitely set you up for a longer chapter in the future between these two.

Good start want more

I loved this story, shame its so short! You could definitely make it longer !! ^^ Love it, continue!

Hot story! Great fantasy with realistic timely touches. Keep on writing!

3/19/20 was my first day of quarantine, just before this posted. Really hope the Gingermedic survived …

Hot but I want more