All Comments on 'Quarantine in Neverland Ch. 02'

Excellent writing so far. Storyline just as good. I like tales that are not rushed and develope realistically.

Waiting for the next chapter. Thanks.

We are in chapter 2 and Brad has barely seen the side of Melissa's tit and nipple. At this rate they won't be having sex until chapter 14 maybe.

This story has got me hooked. I can't wait to read more. I like the way you are building up the suspense and excitement with each little act and didn't have them just jumping into bed in the first chapter.

I really like the story but there are some spots with spelling and grammar errors that caused me to stop and reread the sentence. It's a great read and I'm really looking for the next chapters.

To the half witted dick that described this story as "too much build up" you have no idea about literature

Its a great build up, not one of those stories reads like .. my sisters got big tits after 2 yrs of not seeing her, later that night he walks into the shared shower room n she be there naked telling him, oh come fuck me brother !!!!

Ffs wake up n appreciate a good sensuous build up when you read one ...

If its wham bam thankyou mam you want then fuck off n find one !!

As for this story Its an excellent Piece of writing 🤩🤩🤩

Like the suspenseful build-up across the first 2 chapters. Both are well-written and fun reads.

Just come across this series and so far really promising start. Nice slow build up as the siblings start to get closer together. Hope it continues in this vein.

This feels like the begging of the opening chapter instead of the second. So far everything seems pretty good. Looking forward to more.