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All Comments on 'Quarantine in Neverland Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Tease!

Way too short. But I like your style. The slow build. You wonder how long it’s going to take...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Chapters are too short

Takes the fun out of the story. Start condensing them please.

Sprocket_3006Sprocket_3006almost 4 years ago
Love it, but damn youre a tease

I was really hoping that chapter 3 would have more contact etc to it, cant wait for more

Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 4 years ago

This story is getting very exciting. I love the way you tease us with little things.

ExperienceCountsExperienceCountsover 3 years ago
Continued Anticipation is Great

I have thoroughly enjoyed these first 3 chapters.

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Posted four very different stories this month based on the 750 Word Challenge. Please take the time to read (won't take long) and upvote if you enjoy them! Still working on some longer projects, which may/may not get placed here. Appreciate all the support you've given my s...