by DanDraper
"Well, unlike those men, where you probably had to lie about how fantastic they were, I can honestly say you were amazing."
This mindset is so bad - lets say it's good so there are no chance of improvement.
Lacey will put Sumner hard to work in properly pleasurizing her and will domesticate her into becoming a submissive housewife who will do all the work in washing clothes, shopping for food and keeping the house clean plus will draw in one of her female friends in need of a discipline program to cleanse her of her hatred for lesbians by turning her into one
Love this love story. I hope they try some domme/sub but thats ok if not! I want to read more!
"Lacey got Summer completely on Summer on her back. She began kissing her Summer's lips..."
Actually, that whole paragraph, really: We already know their names, you don't keep repeating them.
"Lacey got Summer completely on Summer on her back and got on top of her. She began kissing her Summer's lips and gently began kissing down her neck to her breasts. She began sucking on Summer's tits, playing with her nipples. She then began to Kissing down Summer's abdomen until she got her head between Summer's legs. Summer opened her legs wide for her; Lacey gripped her hands firmly on Summer's hips as she began to go down on Summer."
That's one of the worst put-together paragraph's I've ever encountered - and I teach university English!