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Click hereYanking myself out and tossing Michelle's legs aside, I took a big step forward to plant my right foot flat on the mattress just past my little sister's shoulder. I filled my right hand with my dick, aiming the fat mushroom head at Michelle's face and jacking it furiously. She opened her eyes just then, staring up at me in wonderment. And then a second later, my cockhead blew.
Once, before, I'd done this to Alex while staring straight at Michelle, imagining I was blowing my load all over my teenaged little sister. I didn't have to imagine anymore.
Ropy strings of jism shot forth, the first one painting a line from my little sister's forehead, across the bridge of her nose, and down her left cheek. The second caught her just above her left eyebrow and over the top of the eyelid. The third one lost power, spraying her lips with a little going into her open mouth. And the fourth went down her chin and neck.
I had a few more squeezes in me, little wads that splattered onto Michelle's heaving breasts and upper chest. On impulse, I bent down and smeared a glob around her left nipple with my mushroom head. At last, I finished and let go of my cock, planting my left hand on the bed and hanging my head to gasp for air.
Michelle looked up at me with a look of shock, cum all over her face.
"Ohmigawd. I'm so sorry about that," I wheezed with an apologetic look. "I don't know what came over me."
Michelle's expression changed to a smile. She wiped a glob of cum off her left eyelid and popped it into her mouth. "Don't apologize. That was pretty cool."
I arched an eyebrow. "Pretty cool?"
Michelle nodded. "First time I watched you and Alex fucking, you pulled out and came all over her face while staring straight at me. And I still remember exactly what you said to her after."
"You look *gorgeous*, Chelle," I told her sincerely.
"I love you, big brother," she told me sweetly beneath her mask of jism. "And I'm so glad we finally did this."
I chuckled. "Me, too."
She stared at my slowly deflating penis, reached up with one hand, and started to fondle it. With her other hand, she scraped up another glob of cum from her cheek, and then sucked on her finger with relish. "You're not tired, right? Can we do it again? And this time, cum in my mouth. I've been wanting to taste you all week."
- COMMENTS
NickCaveover 1 year agoThis has been a fun story. Shit. Every one of us just experienced our first lengthy pandemic, so we all know the massive amount of suck that came with the initial fears of catching COVID. And who doesn't love a great brother/sister incest story, right? Well, Loveemcurvy, finds them to be a huge turnoff as he admitted a few comments below mine. His third biggest turnoff behind only banging mom or grandmother. Yet, he's reading freaking INCEST stories. Jesus Christ...but, I digress.
Things had been great up until this chapter. The main character sucks in many ways, like, his holier-than-thou attitude one second and then his Im-fucking-my-sister-and-its-fine-because-I-CARE-about-her attitude. He goes from being a complete pussy to being Mr. "Take my big beautiful dick!" and back to Mr. Sensitive in 2 minutes - repeatedly. And this whole, "OMG! I'm in love with HER!!!!!!!!!" epiphany has really fucked with my enjoyment of this tale considerably. Again...He's all mature and protective of his little sister, right? ...even though he's as big of a disgusting pig as any of us reading the story are - he's fucking his older sister and WANTS to fuck his younger sister. How chivalrous, right? How the fuck can be slamming his cock into this older sister's pussy non-stop while completely IN LOVE with his little sister? It doesn't happen. It can't happen.
If you've EVER been truly IN LOVE with someone you fuckin' know you're in love with them. "OMG! I've been spending so much time with you recently. Yes, I'm basically FORCED to due to the pandemic...and I'm also doing it because I want to fuck you badly, but since you haven't spread your legs yet, I'm going to go fuck your sister down the hall and we're going to be so loud that you can basically hear every grunt I make when I slam into her slutty ass!!! Can't you feel how much I LOVE YOU, Chelle?! Aren't I a knight in shining armor? Come on! I've spent time with you for days and I hold you at night after I'm worn out from fucking our older sister. Isn't it obvious how I'm in love with you, Chelle?!" Give me a fuckin' break.
I am totally fine with suspending disbelief for Literotica stories. I'd be a fool if I weren't. Some things, however, are just stupid and poorly thought out. THIS is one of them. Strange, because the author clearly has talent in writing. I don't penalize authors for things like this...I'm just using some tough love. LOL Oh yeah, considering he's completely in love with his younger sister and he KNOWS she is completely in love with him, that means there can't be a single additional incident of him doing anything with his older sister...which is unfortunate. After all, he would never disrespect the woman he is completely in love with by fucking around with another woman EVEN IF his love gave him permission. We all know this isn't going to happen. I expect to read about some three-way action soon, to be honest. That's how two people in a brand new budding romance celebrate. Right?! Pffft hardly.
Anonymousover 1 year agoYou cum on a girls face when you take her virginity? SERIOUSLY????
All the rest of it has been pretty good.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoWonderful story. I’m all about the anticipation and this story builds it in a great way. As OldUncleAl stated this story should have much more recognition. You deserve it.
Anonymousover 2 years agoI would have given it 5 stars if the MC wasn't a wuss. Still it was better.👍
Loveemcurvyover 2 years agoWell, Al, you're absolutely right. The number of comments suggests that there are way too few people reading this storyline. Thinking about my own sister is the third biggest turn off, after my mom and my grandma. But in a well written story like this, the sibling factor brings in a lot of extra excitement, trust and layers of love that boost the erotica.
While I too am unsure if the next chapter can match this one, the stories from BDA I've read so far, are giving me confidence that to stop reading would be a huge mistake :).
OldUncleAlover 2 years agoAl again on my reread. I can’t believe no comments in 3 months?! Come on Literotica! This masterpiece should have a 24 point type hyperlink on your front page ! Almost anyone, other than one unnamed gutless wonder, would be begging to join just to continue reading this! It says so much between the lines. It shows wonderful examples of two very different kinds of sibling ❤️. With Alex it’s the somewhat arm’s length ( maybe hearts length would be better?) , physical attraction. Sure they are siblings and they care , but the sex is the basis of the relationship. Now with Michelle, it is like the Beatles song of the same name…..it is about emotion and love. The sexual Encounter Is another much more intimate way to express love for another, be they related or not. And anyone who thinks something so pure, so genuine, so beautiful should not be allowed……….well Old Al will gladly buy you a first class ticket on the next express train straight to Hell!!
Just read the reviews this story has. Men admitting to weeping over the beauty of the romance, women saying how they wish their own intimacy wwas as intense and as pure!
I must admit I do not recall how this winds up. I HOPE it’s not because of an evil turn and I didn’t finish it. I’ve read a few on here that caused me to throw my i-pad against a wall.
After I trashed one and had to replace it, I have been MUCH more careful about getting overly angry at authors screwing up a great story.
I don’t recall bad feelings about this either, so off I go to venture on to the next chapter. Does everyone else feel like it has to be a bit of a let down? I mean there is no way to top perfection, is there?
OldUncleAlalmost 3 years agoTa-Dah! Not only are those two happy, Alex is happy,and everyone on Literotica is happy! Such a successful coupling. Ha. I just love how Alex put everything together and filled her brother in.
Hell, it’s ALL GOOD.
Thank you for the story!
