by HotSprings22
I was hoping the drama would be over so they could just be happy. Guess I'll just see what that bitch Jasmine has planned. :-(
one of my favorite chapters of any story.
It has elicited a need in me I wasn't aware I had! Wow...umm if anyone knows where I can find this kind of man please tell me...whew...
But this is my all time favorite series! And this chapter is hoottt!! I love their chemistry. I cant wait to see the drama unfold. Please post soon!!
Love the last chapter. Hopefully more is on the way soon.
Just when I think it's the end...looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing your talent.
I don't know if any one asked this before but I still have no idea as to how you pronounce Alceo!
When I discovered there was another chapter I was so excited. You are a great and descriptive writer. Keep them coming. Love a story where Good wins over bad. Hope I don't get my heart broken!!! :)
Your challenge, Hot, is to make Galynn - and skeptics like me - believe that Alceo isn't just caught up in the rapture of really great sex. And what the eff is the poor girl gonna do about her living situation? I hope you get into that.
I do adore freaky WM. I live the descriptions in your stories. It feels like I'm there-- I need an Alceo in my life badly.....Keep up the good work and I will be eagerly awaiting your updates
Thank goodness you continued it feels like its taken forever for this chapter to be up! Keep up the good work, i loved it!!! i loved the kinky sex it was very hot :) Please don't take too long to post the next chapter.
Thanks for the story
I actually thought the story ended with them walking off the field in Chapter 5 - it worked. However, this continuation is nice too. Curious to see how it all ends up.
I read it on your site a couple of days ago and just wanted comment here. I am glad you are continuing the story :)
Ugh! I hate that we have to go through the roommate drama soon. :( I hope really bad things happen to the Celt Cunts in the near future...
I love freaks, fantastic, short but descriptive!!!
I may have to hurt somebody unless I take a shower quickly.
Keep it coming
lucky girl found herself a freeaak!! sumbody point me 2 the best @ss eater(in my nicki minaj voice)can't wait 2 see wuts next & how they deal w/the haters! no really I CAN'T WAIT! gonna hafta check out ur posts on the other site. mmfh, this ch. is like an interracial scene w/porn star michael stephano, he always has his face in sum1's @ss!! lol
OH GOD! I THINK MY HAND JUST CRAMPED UP!
*going to take a really cold shower now...
He put it down something serious!!!! Hell I felt it!
This chapter makes me forgives you for taking so long...just please don't keep me waiting like last time.
For the future reference the proper spelling is "losing" not "loosing", such mistakes wreck reading a story fast.
SAY FAB-U- LOUSE NOW HOW LONG WILL IT B BEFORE U WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTERS