All Comments on 'Quarterback Sneak'

I love your writing.

Very, very nice. A little better editing needed, but still easily worth five stars.

A very pleasant surprise! A few grammatical errors here and there that can be easily fixed, but overall, you've done it again! I cannot wait to read more about these two so please update soon!

Can't wait to read more =)

Update soon =)

this is my first time reading a story, and I can tell already this will keep my interest merry Christmas.

Really enjoyed that, just wish it would happen in 'real life'!

Excellent start. Can't wait to read more - there is more coming - right?

I'm so glad you updated and let us know what was up with Red's story. I really enjoyed this and looking forward to reading more!!! Keep up the awsome work!!!

I enjoyed this first chapter. These two are so different from the norm together but seem to have natural chemistry. Let's see where this encounter goes from here.

Please continue and update soon.

Thanks.

Yay! It is great to see you writing again, I love your work :)

Fantastic story... now what indeed!

Great story but you really need an editor/proofreader. especially the places where it should be she or he. It messed up the flow for me a little bit.

love it

I'm supposed to be reading for my Grad classes, but got distracted by your update. Loving the story, it is incredibly hot. ;)

I really really liked this story. I liked the characters of Alceo and Galynn and

loved their simple yet realistic love story....and the HOT sex scenes.

Hopefully your Muse can comply but, we NEED a sequel!

I mean, does their love survive college? Does Alceo go pro?

How do they handle sudden fame and fortune?

How about all the unprotected sex they had?

So many directions this story could go, I dont care what you write

about as long as you write MORE.

This is a treasure. Phenomenal imagery and wonderful character development. I enjoyed, and I'm looking forward to reading on. Well done!

Think I am gonna like this whole series...time to read on!!!

Awesome Story!!!!😀😀😀😀

This is beyond amazing

Would be so much better if you edited, surely if you proof read you'd notice the errors yourself.

Just a quick question: How light was her computer that her bag so easily toppled off the car and topside down into a murky puddle? And if it was that windy, why would she put her things down? The worse her luck got, the harder it was for me to read the story. I'll keep going, though, because I'm curious to see what happens. ~SIGH~

This turned out to be a good story once I got over the second-hand embarrassment.

I liked the concept and storyline but would like to see you get an editor