All Comments on 'Queen Of All She Surveys'

It actually kind of surprised me how many women in real life will completely ignore their financial security and continue to live and depend on a man for years, even giving them children, all the while hoping for a marriage proposal that will never come.

Well done Sir

Second time a great story. For the past few years l’ve been in Glens shoes. The difference is that l have a true soulmate. We’ve been married 41 years and still going strong

Still 5/5

Excellent !

Why would a woman think that a man who wants to fuck her knows how her husband (who *doesn't* want her to fuck someone else) will respond to it?

Unless they truthfully told her, "Well, obviously he's not going to forgive you and will dump your ass. So, you in?"

Good story, thank you.

I read such nasty comments about different authors on this platform. People love to rip people a part anonymously.Please ignore them.Don't let them get you down.

Helen1899 thank you for your lovely comment. Your father and I are both lucky lads. We picked well. I bet your Mum would say that she is lucky, too.

My dad has Cerebral Palsy, he now struggles to walk, him and mum have been married 51 years, and she is has loving now as she has been at anytime in their life ( so he tells me) . Even has to help him dress but she never moans, even tho some days he has tired her out. Isn't that what marriage is about.

Great BTB story, sad for Glen, but worth 5*

She'll have 40 years of good memories to ease her suffering. Well deserved guilt for her betrayal will eat her conscious until bringing her an early death.

Roasted!

So glad the bitch got what was coming to her! You don't EVER treat a good man like that! How stupid that she could not see through her devious brother-in-law. Full Marks 5

5

Just another stupid, entitled, self centered, selfish bitch, serves her right to loose everything.

Well done!

You can't always get what you want, but if you try sometime you'll find you get what you need.

Chrissy got just what she needed.

My wife has RA, but she hasn't progressed to the debilitating point that Glen's has. Treatments every six weeks will hopefully help prevent that from happening, but nature (and God) can be rather cruel.

---

A wonderful story. I hope your surgeries go/went well. Take care. 5*

Nice BTB! I especially liked it for the rare appearance of every member of younger generations (especially kids) being honorable and moral. Not what most LW stories have, sadly. 5 stars just for that.

From the last anon” kept your family hole?” Freudian slip? I think not. I guess all sluts finally realize, they only have one “asset” to sell, and 51% of the population has one too! 5 stars. Way to burn, the bitch!

She looked at her daughters and at Ryan and then spoke.

"So you were all aware of what he was doing but did nothing to help the situation. You all understand what he did and knew of his manipulation from the get go but did nothing.

I am also to blame, i believed his lies and allowed myself to be blinded. I was also not the best partner i could of been to Glen, all of which are my burdens to bear, and mind you they are heavy.

What's more neither of you know what it's like to be in Glen and my situation, both our lives being drastically affected by the disease. With all that you still feel the need to set yourself between us and judge away. You even dare throw punishment my way.

Is this all the kindness you all are willing to offer?"

They were a bit shook by her points but rallied and said, "Either you shut up and accept your punishment and whatever it is we are offering or you can go wherever you want to and kiss your nephews goodbye!".

She stared at them for a few moments then said "Very well then."

Pulling out a phone and called her lawyer asking him to come around, ended the call then turned towards them.

"Ryan, what you may or may not know is that your father not only ruined my life and marriage but also pushed me towards divorcing Glen taking whatever was left of my life away.

I was left without a home, abandoned by family, tricked by a snake and, apparently, left without protection by those with foreknowledge.

Something else you do not know is that because of his actions, in order for me to divorce Glen, leave him with everything, risking my own financial future, as payback for what he did and in order to accept his marriage proposal i made him write a will for my protection.

75% of his shares are mine, as such, 75% of the company is mine. Sure, you still have 25% but due to your own actions and inactions, i shall award you the same level of kindness you have awarded me.

Sure you have 25% of the shares but all you will get are dividends, if they are any. Of course you are fired from the ceo position.

My lawyer will be here soon, coming straight from the company where succession of the shares have been passed to me. You are also banned from the property using your ill intent towards me as reason to do so.

I am a stupid woman, i traded my knight in shining armour for a piece of shit. I let myself be tricked and manipulated. It was slow and hard to notice when up close and personal. But you two, dear daughters, you knew but said nothing.

How can you look at yourself in the mirror knowing that you could of done something to have kept your family hole, but chose not to? How can you look your father in the eyes, knowing that you could gave spared him the pain and sorrow i stupidly caused?"

The lawyer arrived, followed by a sheriff, whom then proceeded to serve restraining orders.

She took a small bag and before leaving the door she said "My lawyer will handle things from now on as i plan to disappear soon. You are on your own. Goodbye!"

Well written, good story, unfortunately you have triggered the anti-male feminists.

There seem to be a couple of anonymous people below who have no comprehension skills. Glen was quite capable of having sex and Chris agreed that he was a far more fulfilling lover than Peter was. That was even with Peter's help. It was Chris who lost interest and only made an effort for Peter because she thought she owed him. Like a whore, she did it for cash.

I find it hard to believe people could be so callous to Glen, wishing him more pain. Let's hope that you never get ill. Disability can happen to anyone. What assholes some people are.

Anonymous below, have we read the same story? How was Glen a selfish prick. He was still doing his duty in the bedroom, rather well apparently, better than Peter by all accounts. Chris was the one not really interested any more but willing to make an effort for the slimy Pete.

As for a pathetic chronically ill burden, maybe I am biased as I am one if those, too. Well, chronically ill not a burden. Apparently, the author is too.

I hope and pray that you never become chronically ill. It can happen at any time to anyone. Let's hope your nearest and dearest don't desert you. Maybe they already have due to your appalling lack of empathy?

"Oh, Glen, I'm so pleased to see you, even on this sad occasion," I stuttered.

"Sad occasion? What sad occasion?" he spat, "It's the best party I've been to in years. I'm just here to make sure that bastard is dead."

Slightly better version... Oh, Glen, I'm so pleased to see you, even on this sad occasion," I stuttered. Glen turned and with an evil grin slapped the shit out of the skank whore slut Chris. "Please do not ever speak to me again whore." She began to get up and try to move to hug him and he slapped her face again so hard she saw stars. She cried for her daughters to come help her but when they saw what had happened the broke into laughter. "You stupid cunt, get the fuck out and don't ever contact us again. If you go to the police we will all agree you went into a rage and tried to attack dad and he just fought you off." Just to make sure she made her point, Emma bitch slapped her mom into next Sunday. She left sobbing and they never had to see or hear from her again.

So this wheelchaired gimp thinks he can decide that his wife's sex life is over. Yeah, don't think so. So all he's offering then is companionship, so her having sex with others and or going on holiday without him isn't taking anything away from him as he neither wants nor can participate in such thing anymore. At least she has the enjoyment of knowing the excruciating pain he's going to suffer for the rest of his miserable life.

Can't quite get over what a selfish prick Glen was. He clearly was a burden and not doing his duty, how can he expect his wife to go without. As for Chris allowing herself to become impoverished, beholden to the financial whims of Pete, I don't think so. No more than I'd imagine the daughters would just burn their relationship with their mum in favour of a pathetic chronically ill burden.

5 stars

I only wish Glen could have gotten revenge on that cocksucker Peter. Men who pursue married women, on that alpha males bullshit, are the biggest "betas" to me.

5 stars from Xluckylee. The bad people got what bad people should get

Very good. 5 stars, the Bear loves a happy ending!!! Are you kidding me?? Tenerife?? Of course, it's a happy ending. For everyone. Who counts.

The BEAR

Just another Narcissist, entitled bitch. This one was tossed on the bank to rot, like a Bighead carp on the Illinois river!

Quelle salope. Elle méritait de se trouver dans un bordel. Bien fait pour sa gueule.

"Self-Involved" a nice alternative to " Self-Centered", boy was she, as an "Average person I've never had the smallest amount of sympathy for "The Pretty People" in any way, especially when bad things befall them, Whatever!

P.S., good luck with the medical problems.😇

A 60 plus yr old SLUT!! No sympathy for the trash, actually she didn't pay enough

Best regards

Enjoyable story, and well written. Best wishes for your upcoming surgeries. 5*

OMG@ A truly horrible woman. She'll be alone for every holiday, birthday. Her future is sad. I can find only the barest thread od sympathy for her.

I also want to wish you the best with these surgeries. I suspect their well past bu my warmest prayers go with you.

For those who sent you terrible, viscious e-mails please disregard them for the vermin they are.

Warmest regards,

Danny

Why average??!!!

Two to cheat But Peter is dead and his punishment is starting. She at least has time to change

me gusto, no es excelente pero es bueno... y me gusto la tematica, mas que la trama en si...

Anonymousabout 17 hours ago

Just another sad story. No winners.

Well, that's the definition of BTB, isn't it?

Just another sad story. No winners.

How absurd. Good on her for leaving his worthless sick ass. You can guarantee that if it was he other way around he'd have left her. Statistics show that to be true, sadly.

It wasn't BTB. Cheating 62yr old skank ditched her husband for her brother in law and screwed herself in the divorce so now she's dealing with the consequences

You don't always get what you want...

Sometimes, you get what you deserve.

Thanks for the share, author.

Anonymous below who gave a 1 star because it wasn't really a BTB. She lost everything of importance to her. Money, her lovely home with Glen, her luxurious house with Peter. The love and respect of her daughters and nephew. The care and protection of Peter.

Most importantly Glen, the true love of her life.

She also had the slow dawning of the reality of what she'd done. Self realisation in your sixties ain't fun.

Not all BTB stories involve a Mexican whorehouse.

All the he while Peter was encouraging Christine to let her husband keep everything, I expected him to screw her up in the end. Dying in ecstasy was the last thing on my mind!

Well done!

I disagree u do always get what you really want

Choose your mate carefully

Superb story

hardly a btb now was it 1*

To anon discussing will: She hadn’t gotten married yet. Dude stroked out a week before the wedding. Plus, I’m pretty sure the story was not set in the US.

Clever, poetic, and karmic, indeed. 🤙🏿

Thanks for an enjoyable read. Take care of yourself and I hope to see new works in the future.

10 Big Blazing Stars for Corny! What a Great Story for a BTB. The cold hearted wife, that thought she 'deserved' better, so decided to run off with the BIL, LOL. Then she was shocked when she returned and her key wouldn't work anymore! LOL perfect. How could she expect anything less? She might not have been thinking about the the 'new dick' she would be getting on her little River Cruise, but everyone else sure was! LOL A woman, especially a married woman, isn't going to go on a 10 day holiday without 'putting out' for another man that is paying for it! LOL Great writing, Thanks, Buster2U

I find that as I get older I’m less concerned about getting everything I deserve and more concerned about whether I deserved what I got.

Great story! I really enjoyed it!

In most US states I am aware of, the spouse is entitled to elect to take a statutory share of the estate if the will fails to provide for her/him. Usually 1/3.

So she can't be left with nothing once married. To screw her over, he needed to die before the wedding, but after she was divorced.

LOVE IT I so hate cheating wives (jaybee186)

A wonderful portrait of shallowness and the rewards that are attained from it.

Difficult to write a story in the first person from the perspective of the “villain”. Hard to make it anything but a farce. That’s what happened here.

A good story but I have to wonder if the overused scenario of a wife going away on some trip with a lover ever really happens? I mean, I'm sure it has but it still feels like a very overused plot in LW. I also wonder if this scenario ever really works out the way the wife claims to expect?

5 stars, sad but enjoyable story. While I usually prefer the story being from the sympathetic person's point of view I like that it was from the "cheating bastard's" point of view to see their mindset. It was clear the wife loved her husband but equally clear she loved herself more, felt she was the main character of life and could get away with anything.

Vielen Dank für die Geschichte(n) und alles Gute für die Zukunft!

Good Story and best wishes for your upcoming trials and tribulations Take care John

Great read Corny1974… my sincere best wishes to you on your upcoming health procedures. I hope all goes well, and I hope to read more of your work in the months and years to come.

Peter was an arrogant greedy cheating deceiving asshole, who coveted Glen's wife, apparently since the day his wife died. So how does someone that evil and monstrous fool people into thinking he's a good guy? You think Evil is difficult to discern? Only if you're not looking; refuse to see it. Glen married and enabled a self absorbed shallow bitch, so he got what he deserved. Two people suffering from a life changing disease, one physical and one psychological. No winners, but at least one of them will live and die with dignity. The other will be the turd in the punch bowl at every family gathering until she's just a turd in the ground.

Husbands are good and wives are bad.

Well, was she stupid!

I wish you a full recovery and good health

good read very much enjoyed by me, thank you

Sort of a 'Woman schemes and God laughs' variation.

Sort of a 'Woman schemes and God laughs' variation.

You don’t always get what you want, but Christine, the cheating bitch, and Peter, the snake, got exactly what they deserved. Another great story, and best wishes for your recovery from those surgeries.

Didn't feel like she got burn, or at least not nearly burned enough for such a heartless. cheating, self-centered slut. She needed to become as helpless as Glen, just for a starter.

What an evil & wretched cheating skank slut you created! Love how she was burned but wish it had been even more severe. Nicely done!

Nicely written, enjoyed the story, but the ending could have been teased out a little more.

Thoroughly enjoyed and impressed by the craftsmanship. Thanks and 5 stars from me.

Best wishes and good luck from one to another. Mine was from a motorcycle wreck back in 1972 and my lovely bride has stood by me through thick and thin. 😁😁😁😁😁

5* Best wishes for a speedy recovery!

Bitch got what she deserved.

Gold digger 101, get in the will asap

Wow. And it was all her own work! 5* story. She burnt herself.

I enjoyed this immensely! The dialog was expressive and flowed well! Thank you!

-

Be well!

You got yours, slut!

Nice little story and good luck with your health problems.

this was a solid 3*. Good luck with your surgeries.

Ryan acknowledges his father intended to change the terms of his will to favor the MC but then does very little for her when Peter dies suddenly and unexpectedly. Three months of rental payments for a cheap apartment is all he is willing to do for her? Believing it unjust that Ryan should profit by essentially stealing from his aunt and intended step mother, the MC decided that her nephew would not live to enjoy his inheritance. Since she did not financially benefit from his death, the police did not have a strong case against her when Ryan was mysteriously shot and killed outside his apartment late at night just before her ex husband's planned move to Tenerife. The move was postponed due to the murder since the authorities wanted to question the entire extended family, and there was a funeral to arrange. The move never happened after Emma and her father were among those who were mysteriously poisoned by food served at the wake. The source of the poison, which apparently was added to several dishes which had come from different neighbors, was never found. Neither ever regained their previous level of health, and both were chronically dependant on the MC for assistance with their daily lives once they were released from hospital care.

May you have a speedy recovery from your surgeries. Well done on your story well worth 5 *****

Wow, she was something else.

Best of luck medically.

Good god some people read a story and take the characters completely differently don't they? LNRA doesn't see the evil in this grown woman? In what she does to her husband of decades? How she treats him? She's just naive and stupid...like an innocent child unable to think critically?

Instead it's the BIL and moreso the children who are the evil ones since they are holding her accountable for her actions. Yeah. Pure evil they are.

Some people see through very tinted lenses it seems.

@someoneother I had a similar takeaway as yourself. Though I was thinking that if Glen had not cuddled a wife who he realized over the years was an inherently selfish and spoilt entitled diva. He would have established guidelines in there relationship which would have made her think twice before brutally betraying him. Similarly in recognizing that Peter was a female version of his wife and a snake in the grass, he should have limited contact and created boundaries within reason between his members of his family and Peter. You can be there for someone in there times of need but if you see them taking advantage of a situation, then don't believe in the inherent goodness of someone when over the years they have proven to be duplicitous and underhanded.

Blaming her for Peter's death is ridiculous. The dude was a grown ass man for Christ's sake. That's the only part of the story that didn't make any sense to me. You started off blasting her and then went on to say Peter was intent on seducing her away from Glen. Which is it? Her magic vagina made Peter kill himself like an addict or he was such a narcissistic douchbag that he all but committed suicide pretending to be something he wasn't? Kind of can't have it both ways. Otherwise, it wasn't a terrible story.

I realize that it's sort of the point of the story, but she begrudges the care she gives Glen, but is happy to care for Peter.

\

"He deserved it as he'd been so generous." - HE deserved it? She's the one who has been helping him.

\

"What I didn't have at that time was someone to point out that if I'd loved Glen as much as I claimed, I wouldn't have abandoned him to have sex with his brother-in-law." - Yep, that's the perfect answer to the, "If you loved me, blah, blah, blah."

\

"the constant sex to try and keep you satisfied" - Actually, he was the one insisting on constant sex.

\

@LNRAstro, how are the kids evil? Because they wouldn't help her after she abandoned her ill husband and her meal ticket died?

Good enjoyable story. Wife decides to take a vacation from her marriage with her brother in law, but the bitch doesn't tell her husband, but writes a letter. Talking about not only betrayal, but disrespect on a grand basis! And she actually expected her husband to not only accept, but to forgive her? There're certain things forgivable; what she did was totally not. The children stepped up, letting her know what they thought about her. That Ryan respected Glen more than his own father spoke volumes about Ryan, Glen, & the now dead bastard. 4 stars, while hoping your surgeries wind up good for you. Bob

Excellent story. Clean, concise, and very real. Thank you for sharing a part of your life with us. I pray your surgeries go well.

Besides the love thing, marriage is also an insurance policy. She had the assurance that Glenn would love and care for her, “for richer or poorer, in sickness and in health.”

Sad that she wasn’t prepared to honor her commitment to Glenn.

4 stars for another selfish bitch story.

I did enjoy her reward for treating her husband so poorly.

Karma is the biggest and meanest BITCH in the valley.

A half-decent ambulance-chaser could have gotten her a slice of the pie (and taken 70% 😋) on the strength of the engagement ring, so Ryan's "generosity" is a smart move.

Good job - a well-done little tale of narcissism and betrayal, with realistic, all-too-human failings and comeuppance,

Another good mild BTB short tale, that shows in full what can happen to those narcissistic, egopathic wives, with their brain between their legs. And sometimes, things can get much worse in real life. From the selfishness grows the evilness, the dishonesty and the endless lies, like an addiction, that lead to more and more evilness, until the light of the Justice destroy the darkness. 5* for a little light in the darkness.