All Comments on 'Queendom 10: A Night Too Long'
by Lady_Agrafena
- 41 Comments
AliceTag4 months agoSome great twists here. love the longform descent of the Queen but also her sparks of resistance. Also, good on Bella and tarquin.
Anonymous4 months agoBrilliant work as always. But I wish there are more incidents and more story progression .
And Please try to post chapters more quickly. If you find the chapter is not to your you satisfaction you can always reedit it afterwards. I would read both the versions.
RoissyAngel4 months agoI enjoyed this. I felt it dragged a bit with the ruffians but not overtly so. Just a personal preference to get to the juicy bits. Superbly written. An interesting little kingdom, or queendom, has been created with very believable, living characters. No mean feat for a writer to achieve this. If anyone asks me to suggest a filthy novel I will point them to this.
Uzwl_fer1yfe4 months agoAnother great chapter!
Keep up the good work, I like how the story is progressing, the pacing could be a bit higher but I still like your writing.
Can't wait for the next entry!
Anonymous3 months agoI'm liking how the story is progressing. Maybe you could write a scenario where the queen knows that she's smoking hot and uses herself to tease the servants a little. Or the handlers could get her to show a bit more skin in the public, maybe accidentally flash someone.
Also I'm wondering how the queen's private mold is going to be used.
Anyway keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next part hope it comes soon.
Anonymous3 months agoThe story is is slow but pretty good imo, like I've been waiting for an anal scene forever, but still it's just being teased.
Also I would like to see the queen do some minor tasks as herself and not hiding behind demura identity.
Can't wait for the story to continue
Anonymous2 months agoThat was unfortunate, Was really excited to see where the story goes from here. I thought the chapter was finished :), Anyways, Hope it goes well, I don't mind waiting. Hope we see some action with the handlers and all those plot points in previous chapters get a closing
Anonymous2 months agogreat writing, great story. any chance the queen gets an OTK and do humiliating cornertime obediently to be taken down another peg, or subdued and restrained by her own clothing, gagged with her under garment or socks, just some ideas, thanks for the fantastic series
Anonymousabout 2 months agoYou can upload the Raw version first. And the edited version later on.
Would love to read both the versions.
Anonymousabout 2 months agothe delay is WOW, the author has no perception of time.
hyping up and then slap a huge delay, with same reason of splitting the story into 2 parts.
just upload the Raw version.
appreciate the story tho, just maybe work on the deadline or not, either way good story.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoCome on guys, the author has a life too. This is not a full time job for them. It is a hobby, most probably. Let's not pressure the author into spending extra time away from their regular life. And I believe pressure results in bad results too.
It is definitely painful though, waiting so long for the next part of such a good story.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoI am not asking for the complete chapter but I just hope that author provides an update regarding the progress made with the next chapter.
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