All Comments on 'Queendom 11: Original Offense'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Wonderful work as always. Definitely worth the wait. Hope the next part is available soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Brilliant work. The story is well set up.

Could you please make the Queen and other Noblewomen perform more tasks.

Please try to provide the next chapter ASAP.

Uzwl_fer1yfeUzwl_fer1yfeabout 1 month ago

Is it just me or dit it feel like there wasn't anything sexual in the entire chapter? Which was 50k words btw.

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Can we get some action when the queen is not hiding behind the demura character. Some sexual explorations of the queen herself. Cause when she's demura it feels like there are no consequences to anything she does

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

one chapter left for book one, great writing

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Actually, an update said two, or probably three more chapters left.

Not your best, but a good chapter, by the way. Queen tossing mango to that boy, was my favorite moment!

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

A slower chapter compared to the last one, but hopefully it'll lead to something spicy later on.

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

hope there'd be more actions next chapter, still a fantastic chapter! Not sure if there're scenes that may have the queen waiting patiently in different submissive postures, such as hands on her head and nose against the wall, or biting down a pen as a gag order, before it build up to her ass subjugation. just throwing ideas. more chapters if you can please

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Did she wash her face or not?

It wasn't very clear

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

When can we expect the second part? This cliffhanger is killing me

AnonymousAnonymous8 days ago

How's the progress going with the next part?

AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

Please provide an update regarding the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

When the queen said "I'm sure you were just eager to serve the throne, we can arrange for that"

I thought she was going to make him serve her. Would've been cool to see that

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Story update 03/05/24- Chapter 12 is progressing well. Will likely take two more weeks to complete. ** The story (Book I) concludes in two or three chapters. There will be a few months break before publishing Book II. Love to hear feedback! That's the best way to reward...

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