by Hooked1957
Beautiful. Dogs, unlike a lot of women, are usually faithful. Why do you think women are portrayed as cats?? The Bear approves. 5 stars.
The BEAR
Just a thought. In the eyes of the law (and to me, of course Bryce condoned the affair for well over a year. makes a difference in adultery cases. Four stars. Could have been three.
What the hell. Three stars.
JPB
I think you did pretty good for the length of that story. Nice to see a compassionate judge character too.
Don't know what else he got after two plus years of preparation, but at least he got the dog!
Vera is a cheating bitch, I dont get why Bryce waited so long to divorce the bitch. Vera loves Bryce but cheats with his friend, hides it and lies about it??? That is not love.
Umm why did Bryce wait so long? Nothing but compounded heartbreak and hardship there. I am sure Liza would have liked to have known earlier. Vera was delusional and beyond self entitled. Hank chose wisely.
When a good writer lacks a sensible editor, we tend to get comments like previous one: "Yet another non ending:."
We are told about a loving husband who tried to save his marriage to a spoiled brat, and not a word of hope for him from the author. When an author starts to disrespect his male MC, it is time to look for a better author, or at least one clever enough to have a great editor. I wonder who the man hating editor happens to be?
The Hoary Cleric
I was trying to count the number of times this author has written this story, but I gave up when I ran out of fingers and toes!
He let this go on for years? WTF!!!! Give your MC some bloody balls would ya.
Seems like the Authors testosterone levels have dumped lower than the already poor world average levels.
Literotica, the biggest single killer of parents in car accidents. Don’t think I would have lasted two years without giving Anand a slap.
Bryce the dumb cuck got what he deserved, but he at least had the self-respect to file for divorce after cuckolding himself for nearly 3 years.
3 stars.
Waited a year after getting the papers ready, knowing the affair had been long term. Bryce is a pussy. Can’t like any character. Why make Bryce so weak. Just because you love someone doesn’t make your brain go to jelly or weak willed.
Only two stars ⭐️ for this one. Bryce was portrayed as an overly-patient wimp. He should have had words with her and IMMEDIATELY kicked her to the curb when he found out about her cheating. There were was no reason to wait for her to give Anand up. At least Hank was able to choose wisely.
Again, a wonderfully written yarn that packs a whallop. Unfortunately, Bryce is a pussy for being a cuck for 2 years and not getting some revenge on Anand bezides telling his wife. The abrupt ending also did nothing for me.