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HamsterHamsterover 9 years ago
Giant Leaps

Well, the heroine made a giant leap from mousedom. Unfortunately the leap was too far for my suspension of disbelief. She REALLY needed her girlfriend to lead the way in this, and we needed to see more of the battle between the old and new, both internal and in her interaction with her girlfriend as well as the guy from the theater. A great "guy fantasy", just too much in a page an an eighth.

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I love to write, although I do not always have time to do so. I am by no means a great writer, but I do think I'm pretty good. In life as in writing, I do my best to get better everyday, improve with every experience. That being said, all feedback is appreciated, even if wh...