All Comments on 'Rachael, Slave of Emarukistan Ch. 03'

I love your style and the narrative is simply sublime. Very good writing! Although this seems to be the end of Rachael and the Warrior, I hope it's not the end of Rachael's tale.

I'm enjoying the story but I think you'll readership will start dropping off if there's not some detailed sex soon. This is Literotica after all.

Great story.

Personally I prefer stories like these, that are open about sex but follow an interesting storyline, over those that use a flimsy storyline to glue together a series of sex acts.

This is a good story, very well written with depth of characters, plot. Also decent world-building. Do not be troubled about the call for detailed sex scenes, RachaelJane, a good story is a good story with or without them.