by DavidKnight
albeit a nice one.....so now write another chapter describing the threesomes' sexploits!!
This one definitely needs a continuation. It is awesome, but incomplete, unfortunately. So I graded it as such.
This is a very well written erotic story. I want to read more of this writer's work and would love to know where the story of Rachael and Laura go from here. Mr. Knight should consider writing a part 2.