All Comments on 'Rachael's Passion'

by DavidKnight

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sacksackover 19 years ago
now THAT is a fantasy....

albeit a nice one.....so now write another chapter describing the threesomes' sexploits!!

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Awesome!!!

This one definitely needs a continuation. It is awesome, but incomplete, unfortunately. So I graded it as such.

gizzmo301gizzmo301over 19 years ago
Nice

This was a good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Extremely well written

This is a very well written erotic story. I want to read more of this writer's work and would love to know where the story of Rachael and Laura go from here. Mr. Knight should consider writing a part 2.

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