All Comments on 'Rachel Pays the Rent - Ch. 01'

I must admit I love stories like this!!! Keep it going and degrade those two sluts!!!!

The writing isn't terrible, but it's not particularly great either. But what really made me give this one star is the weird bait and switch. To be fair, I don't really care for the whole "sixty year old woman with inexplicable age defying giant tits who still looks young" thing. I don't care for older women, and I certainly don't understand the appeal of old women that still look like young women.

So to have the story essentially go "Meet our young-ish protagonist and accompany her on her sexy adventures. Just kidding, here's the titsy grandma nobody asked for instead" was a turn off. I get that this is going to be an ongoing story, but that was a shitty way to go about it.

Didn't even read the shoehorned sex scene. Won't read any further chapters.

Love it so far! I look forward to Janet and Rachel being used in the next chapter.

Love this already. Add silk panties to your story. Will go well with the heel fetish

Since checking your posted stories, I know you will bring us multiple chapters of Rachel journey. Great setup for the next chapter.

Great opening, look forward to reading more.

Bring the next chapter

I am looking forward to another terrific series.

I'm thinking between Janet and Rachel the boys balls will be drained every day. Great start, on to more.

I would have went to go get a baseball bat or back to my place to pack my shit and be gone.