All Comments on 'Raging Love Ch. 09'

the best chapter so far...retribution at its finest...

"raging love" is simply awesome.. and for me - your best work so far!

indeed, you are a master of dramas...drama unfolding one after the other..

i wonder what will happen to santiago?..just like praveen he deserves his happiness too... will it be ethan?..then everyone has a happy ending...

And so it begins..............right away from destined hearts..to raging love,Vanalas has shown us the skills a true writer has to exhibit🤔🤔🤔🤔who argues??????...no one should.,if u guys remember in chapter one of Destined hearts(DH)where Ant was taken to praveen's house to meet him for the first time...there was no love up to chapter 11 where we had that sexy hot romantic scene......unlike in really hit series like Unbroken where chapter 5 had Aidan and Luis at it already do u remember that?????...okay do u remember the plot in stand for love???..how Jake's marriage diverted to Adrian's??...what am showing u guys is what we call plotting.....no plot is repeated on his series and the Raging love/praveen/Travis/Antonio reign has got the most twisted plots of all time...are arguing??? Then go and read the finally of season 1(DH) and check if in Vana-series we have death and revival of lead roles

Yes....the reason why this is the distinguished chapter of DH/RL drama..and in all stories is that"IT STARTS WITH SUSPENSE AND ENDS IN SUSPENSE"...WHO argues???remember where we started it???.Baby sweet boo Sean was in trouble...unconscious due to the deliberate accident from Bruce,yet again it ends with the kidnap of still baby Sean by Bruce still😞😞😞😞😞😠😠😠😠😠😠fuck who the hell does this bitch Bruce call himself huh???...u know since his smell is of defeat now..he has guts of kidnapping our baby to smear him the jelly of losers FUCK HIM...THAT BITCH IS REALLY CRAZY...HE HASNT HAD ENOUGH EEH???? HUH MAY BE JUST HUMILIATION FROM HIS BAD DEEDS IS SO LITTLE...OKAY HOW ABOUT DEATH??????

OK....hahahaha,man i remember how Travis Literally hurt Bruce the moment he,said"u can hurt me but not my life..no one dares to touch my son"am sure that bitch was ugly as fuck after jknowing they the boy Antonio really loves is Travis's ohhwwww too bad he can't even produce for him..hahaha UNPRODUCTIVE SLUT....hahaha man the way Antonio almost killed this slut after knowing the truth hihihihihi....and he doesn't learn,basing on the past incidents with Antonio he wud v known that the guy doesn't even want to see his blink🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗but hey..if at,all he was able to have Kendrick a nothing man then yes.....a cheap item always isolates from GOLD

Hahaha..in the end of chapter 8,when praveen and Santiago turned to meet the surprise that concluded the 5the page,i was like God no let me hope no culprit is pointing a gun at them....i didnt expect Granny KATY TO BRING IT ON HIHIHIH....oh our poor lady i can imagine how she feels when her daughter tried to kill her man.....even our Granny was hurt but atleast good is good she was spared from that drama weed man they was massive.....hahaha the most interesting thing is they had gathered all of them....hihihih good is The Lord,right infront of them the truth unfolded hahahahaha those slaps from Katy were😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘hahaha.yyyeeeeeeeah🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😀😀😆😆😆😆

I think Bruce and Emma have got the most out of Travis's revenge😊😊😊😊😊😆😆😆😆😀😀😀hey dont laugh....i mean the way Emma was recently humiliated in chapter 8 with Bruce hahahaha🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😁😁😇😇😇😇😇and today's slaps eeh man the way the truth threw its self to her face and she cudn't do a thing with all the influence she has....hahaha look at poor Bruce,first it was at the getaway..i mean the pool scene ,then the fasting party,when Travis was back at the party with Paul and now the truth..man the bitch is just primitive..had it been me,i wud be fighting 😂 to be Travis's masuer hahahaha or may be the Dobbi

Man Van i hate it when our man is like this...i knew the truth wud shatter him but....am now sad Van,yes he z a jerk,a traitor..an irresponsible man..a betrayor...an asshole but if i remember well.him being a jerk was in chapter 1-7 in DH,by 8 he was friendly to us...it went on upto 12 where we were framed so let him be happy Van...enough our man has suffered lies..he was also fooled Van,let him be happy with Prav cos he deserves it.....😐😐😐😣😣😣😣😣😣Fuck,i remember how he almost died when prav said he doesn't love him...man the wy he almost killed Bruce..how he went crazy...man the way he confronted prav in the office..those pleas okay ....i cant deny that i v been longing to hear sweet words from him.....Man the guy z gorgeous ....the way he called mum Emily mom again..."cure me,mom,please".....Van please enough Antonio has got enough...plus mum Emily and Ethan let them be free.....hahaha Emily mum said "bitch" and i was like did i really read this????..i read it again😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

Yes...am the best fan of Santiagito here and i stand for my word...he was the man of the story well..like the Hero,given the fact that he z the second most handsome guy(definitely after Antonio)..so Plz van..give him the best...no way u shud end this without him having a lover..pls let us be even okkkk.......plz Van give us two more chapters of love,i swear am gonna die if am going to miss Ant and prav plus my Santiago.....😠😠😠😡😡😡😡😡😡😡i wish Bruce death for even touching Santiago...that toilet,i swear i can kill him for even attempting to hurt my Santiago......am Gonna miss them but my baby..oh baby Sean man why.....our baby is the victim now...its our tym Van...let Prav bring out the iron rose on him....i wish to see him,Miguel.Aiden and ADRIAN atleast in the finale....remember his brother in season one????....i miss him

I get it. You added a little touch of typical romantic novella. Obviously, you are inspired by telenovelan dramas. You would make an awesome screen writer! I think you already brought the justice that the Book 1 deserves. Raging love was quite a very hot and significant sequel. And I like it. Who am I kidding, I love it!

Don't quit your day job! Hahaha Joke. I love you Van and I will always be a fan of your wonderful imagination. I will be waitinh for your next story.

Hey, do you want to publish your stories on GA.com the community there is very welcoming and good. I think that site deserves you. Gayauthors and Literotica are my fave sites.

I LOVE the chapter. Intense, emotionally heavy- a great transition from the last chapter to this. Freaking good job!

I know I've said before that I don't want Trav and Antonio to end up together, but reading this chapter, I've realized that while it's cool having people's input, you should stay true to your vision Van. Because face it readers, we can't get everything we want.

Love you more!

I decide now to reserve my other 4 comments for the finale...though😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍i cant wait to meet Eric in the Game of love ......hohohhohoho😎😎😎😎😎😎🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓lets go for this....i wish to have a play boy there hahaha and a tough baby hahahaha😄😄😄😄😃😃😃😇😇😇😇😇😇

Best scenes---page 4 of Antonio and Travis + pages 5,6(Antonio save our son)😁😁

Most Emotional scenes --all of the chapter was emotional😭😭😭😭😭😭

Man of the chapter-Santiago

Victim---Antinito

Man of the game--TRAVIS

THEME SONGS...Needed me and unfaithful --rihanna

Take a bow--rihanna

Its too late to apologize--timberland

Cry me a river--Justin Timberlake

SORRY-JUSTIN BIEBER FROM ANTONIO TO PRAVEEN

.....AM HOOKED MY KING,SHOW ME ME WHAT U GOT

I have stayed glued to this story since the very beginning. It's very exciting and full of such raw emotion. The characters feel real and the passion they express is so amazing and heartfelt. The suspense really keeps you glued to your seat and waiting for the next chapter. I'm sure the finale will be amazing, seriously can not wait. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with all your fans.

~Chance~

Hey Van haaaaaa I guessing true they meet

Granny Katy hue?

Thank you so much for this masterpiece

Love you

You need to write a book man. I have to read the end.

Antonio cheated on Praveen before they got married....Antonio mentally and physically abused Praveen before and...even after marriage.... Cheat, abuse ensue..... Now Bruce n Andrea framed Praveen...Antonio went off badly toward to Praveen...and Antonio cause death of his own by suicide and his own father by proxy...Sean near death once again by proxy....with Bruce twice harming Sean... What the fuck? Author still planning bring them back together after all Antonio done... Now he found out about his son....now...he's suddenly threat Praveen with emotion abuses and guilting him in order to get Praveen back?! How is this CALLING LOVE?! THIS IS JUST NARCISSISTIC SELFISH ONE SIDE SO CALL "LOVE" IN REALITY Antonio just treat Praveen as property....item....thing on his beck! What the hell?!

It's good that Travis choose to not getting back to such bastard. Someone like him claim that he will change is just fucking bullshiting be wise with that type of personality as soon he got Travis back then slowly and eventually he will regain controlling Travis . He is that type...

This would be better off if they end up as friend! Sharing Sean in calm way, win win scenario not Antonio 's scenario!

This book is good but sadly I don't like the ending because I bet...once Sean is saved...Antonio might end up wound or something cause Travis\Praveen guilt a d back to so call husband where he expect his own husband to be on his beck and starving him out on fast day....and many more abuses. Ragging love? My ass! Terrible ending.

What a chapter! Although, Bruce hasn’t gotten busted for cheating on Antonio yet, Grandma Katy made a perfect entrance to spill the details! Bruce needs to die. Thank you!

Can you make it a little more believable like seriously Bruce managed to drug ALL the guards and one was also disarmed by Antonio. And did Santiago seriously get knocked out by Bruce I mean really it was that easy.

I have been so badly waiting for the last chapter. I love the way you have woven different strands together to arrive at this cliffhanger. Please upload the final chapter very soon. We have been waiting for more than a fortnight now.

Aww! Please don’t make us wait too long! Thank you!