All Comments on 'Rags to Riches Ch. 01'

Despite the cliff hanger at the end (and I have faith in June) or even because of it, I love this. It is a brilliant sequel to your wonderful The Lady and the Orphan. Your talent as a writer is obvious, and you grow in fluency and skill as you write more. Yes, I am biased, but when it comes to writing I am as straightforward in speaking as you are about everything, and this is a clear 5 stars. On tenterhooks for the next chapter xxxxx ❤️

June oh June! it’s so good to see you blossom as a writer! I’m not saying anymore now I’m waiting for part two!

A good, readable chapter. I certainly wasn't expecting that cliff-hanger---a good cliff-hanger is a sure fire way to get your readers gasping for more. Your writing is coming on well and all I can add is keep working. Five stars for this one.

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JPint continues to surprise and impress with this continuation of The Lady and The Orphan series.: The seamless integration of themes and characters, along with the perfectly fitting and logical progression of events, would lead one to believe that this addition had always been part of one grand outline. The twist at the end presents all sorts of possibilities and potential resolutions. - I look forward to JPint's treatment of such a consequential moment in the lives of these two true lovers. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

The complexities of life as fame unfolds….

Many levels of tension intermixed with gleeful euphoria (and lust!).

Curious to see the next chapter!

Oh my word! What a cliff-hanger ending! If both June and Pixie are "playing away" does this count as cuckoldry? Lol! Can't wait for chapter 2. This first chapter gets 5 stars naturally.

Pixie, as always THANK YOU,

You are my inspiration

Thank you Cleeve, should be published soon

Maonaigh, you are so kind and I feel I’ve even passed your English class too…giggles

Thank you Olwen for your kind comments and your note to me the other day.

i hope you enjoy the next chapter as much

Hi Anonymous if you enjoy the story as much I as I do writing then we have a winner.

Paul, thank you..fingers crossed you also enjoy Chapter Two

June - I am quite sure you look radiant in Gucci and sexxy in those Jimmy Choo's. A Very nice, quick and fast moving chapter setting us up to want more.

Thank you so much Sexxyboi, Pixie tells me I look radiant without clothes too…giggles

June, I like the addition of new players into your stories which can add more spice..giggling. Love the direction this going.

Gerri, thank you so much, I hope you enjoy chapter 2, and 3 is in current production. 💋

such a hot take - pixie seems a natural sub, Cara is a good creation - love this - 5 stars

Anonymous, thank you

Great start. Why this is not H is a scandal, you had me … Ann 🌟

Thank you Ann, I live in hope

I thought the story was good - and loved the two mains - you and her sound so sexy - five stars

Mistress Ann said to give this five - it ought to be possible to give it ten - we both put bits of it into practice - SubMonica x

I didn't know the site did love stories - this is a good one - keep up the good work JP

To all my anonymous readers, thank you.

I understand anonymity but if you are willing to let me know who you are it would kiss my heart.

June

I love how you and your wife incorporate each other in stories..

No say it ain’t so great cliff hanger, my only critique I have as I do with all stories I like …too short lol which a compliment to you and your story telling. Good job

2xsafreak, thank you for your kind words

Then the going gets tough the living gets boiled …. Successfully but lonely, just the norm and then opportunities on every corner ….. so a lonely heart is crying for LOVE but we mix this with sex and Bang boom ….. and the model business is definitely freaking …. We reader will see what happens 😳

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Thank you Franz